Monday, November 29, 2010

Top Ten!

1:  Better luck next time, Prince Charming

2:  6 months later, you're still mad

3:   Drop everything, lets go to Vegas

4:  Dwight get out of my nook!

5: Got together, fought once, broke up

6:  This is how we do it

7:  It kind of smells like, apricots

8: I'm not comin' to your party

9: Mom says, give toys to unfortunate

10: Living up to my, sisters example

Sunday, November 21, 2010

You Should've Killed Me When You Had The Chance

So I say goodbye to a town that has ears and eyes
I can hear you whispering as I walk by
Familiar faces smiling back at me and I knew
This would make them change

The only thing that's going to bother me
Is that you'll all call yourselves my friends

Why can't you look me in the eyes one last time?

The writings on the wall, you've read that I'll be gone, but if you call my name
Just know that I'll come running, for one more night to spare with you 
This is where I'm meant to be, please don't leave me

I’ve read these stories a thousand times, and now I’ll rewrite them all 
You’re meddling in an anger you can’t control
She means the world to me, so hold your serpent tongue
Is a whores lies worth dying for? I'll just take my time

The only thing that's going to bother me
Is that you'll all call yourselves my friends

Why can't you look me in the eyes one last time?

The writings on the wall, you've read that I'll be gone, but if you call my name
Just know that I'll come running, for one more night to spare with you 
This is where I'm meant to be, please don't leave me

I walked into your house this morning
I brought the gun from our end table
Your blood was strewn across the walls
They'll find you on your bathroom floor

I walked into your house this morning
I brought the gun from our end table
Your blood was strewn across the walls
They'll find you on your bathroom floor when I'm done

But should I write it all off?
But should I write it all off?
But should I write it all off? (You should have killed me when you had the chance)
But should I... ? (You should have killed me when you had the chance)
You should have killed me when you had the chance
You should have killed me when you had the chance








Plot:Guy gets talked about, decides to do something about it, kills the girl.






Character:The town, male character, and a female




Conflict:People are talking behind the males back. Female is lying about him.
He feels they must pay for what they've done to him. Kills the girl




Theme:Don't talk behind peoples backs






Setting:Town, doesnt specify large or small. Female's House bedroom and bathroom.